Chapter Four was added to the ranks last night. In case you think my husband is an easy to please editor, think again. He looked it over as I typed and told me there was a goodly section of girly stuff in it. I thought at first that the girly stuff was essential. I slept on it and then went and decided to scalpel it out myself. The chapter flowed better without it. So, I’ll just say, “Yes dear, you told me so,” even though he’s not the “I told you so” type. 😉
Part of me wants to be giving you spoilers about the plot here, and part of me wants to leave it a mystery until the book comes out. Which part should win, I wonder?